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假设你是中学生李华,最近发现有些同学经常到学校附近的网吧（cyber cafe）玩.几天前,你也去了一次,发现了许多不良现象,请根据下面四幅图画所示内容,写一封信给报社编辑,发表看法,提出建议.
注意：1． 图画内容应全部包含,可适当补充细节；
2． 观点积极、正确；
3． 词数：120左右；
4． 参考词汇：因特网Internet聊天chat vi. & n. 在线的online
【学生作文】
Dear editor,
I am Li Hua. Recently, I have found some students often go to the net bar near our school to play with the computer. I also went into the net bar before some days and found many bad phenomenon. For example:
Once after school, many students went into the net bar, even forgot to have meals. They also watch films on the Internet and play the computer well. They chat with their online friends from time to time and send letters or e-mail for love.
As far as I’m concerned, students should learn knowledge with their best. They shouldn’t do something bad because they are only a child. They must achieve great progress in their study so that they can have a very good future.
【教师点评】
此篇习作基本覆盖了所要求的全部要点,对学生上网这种不良行为也坚持了自己积极的态度,但语言结构松散,分段太乱,从而使得整体不紧凑,而且最基本的语言错误较多,所以尽管有些地方使用了比较高级的词汇,也不能使本篇文章进入较高档次,只能属于第三档.
【教师修改】
1. 格式不完整
只有开始的呼语,却缺少结尾处的Yours truly, Li Hua
2. 段落混乱
在列举学生在网吧里的不良现象时使用一段就够了,根本不需要分段列举.
3. 语言运用错误
（1） 单复数问题错误
many bad phenomenon应改为many bad phenomena；而they are only a child则是个令人生气的错误,说明没有基本的语言感觉,应为they are only children.
（2） 语言表达不准确
play with the computer是“和电脑玩”的意思,而“玩电脑游戏”是play the computer games；
For example用于“举例”,而“列举”应该为such as；
play the computer well应该为play the computer games well；
send letters or e-mail for love应该为send love letters or e-mails；
learn knowledge with their best应该为try/do their best to learn knowledge.
（3） 语言表达错误
before some days这纯属是望文造词,“几天前”应该是the other day；
watch films是犯了交叉搭配的错误,“看电影”应该为see a film,而“看电视”则是watch TV；
Once after school 这里有两处错误：一是想象造词after school,二是Once后一般跟句子.所以此处应改为Once school is over.
【修改后的文章】
Dear editor,
I’m a middle school student named Li Hua. I’m writing to tell you something.
Recently I have found some students often go to the cyber cafe near our school to play the computer games. I also went into the cyber cafe the other day and found many bad phenomena. When school was over, many students went into the cyber cafe, and even forgot to have meals. They see films on the Internet and play the computer games as well. They chat with their online friends from time to time and send love letters or e-mail.
As far as I’m concerned, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than a place for playing games. Internet is good if we make good use of it. So students should try their best to learn knowledge. They shouldn’t do anything bad because they are only children. They must achieve great progress in their study so that they can have a very good future.
Yours,
Li Hua
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